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sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 2004-03-20 05:45 PM

You mean so very much to me
You've made me born again
You are manna for my soul
And the ink that fills my pen

You inspire me to greatness
And make me a far better man
You are unceasing encouragement
And help me be all that I can

You are an irreplaceable character
In my happily ever after story
You are the sparkle of the morning dew
And the sunrise in all of her glory

You are the scent of spring flowers
And the light of the harvest moon
You are the heat of a summers day
And the brightness of winters noon

You are the caress of an ocean breeze
And the surf breaking upon my shore
You are the depth of ancient woodlands
And to me you are so much more

You are the sound of nature's music
And the steps in a dance for two
You are a sweet shop's featured flavor
And the rainbow's every hue

You are fuel for my poetic muse
My heart, my soul and my life
The summation of all of my dreams
The ideal lover, friend and wife

You've emptied my existence
Then poured yourself within
You are manna for my soul
And the ink that fills my pen

Steven Seaman

You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back.
--Barbara DeAngelis

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-20 05:54 PM

Good to read someone who loves his wife this much!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-20 06:49 PM

mana from heaven

Dave

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-03-20 06:50 PM

Sweet! She is lucky!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-03-20 07:52 PM

You've emptied my existence
Then poured yourself within
You are manna for my soul
And the ink that fills my pen

Lovely thoughts. Just lovely. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-21 12:42 PM

oh how sweet it is!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-21 02:29 AM

this is beautiful!

seaslady
Junior Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 43

7 posted 2004-03-21 08:18 PM

ohhhh!!!! this is sooo beautiful... so tender, and so loving...
it made my heart melt and made me cry..

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

8 posted 2004-03-21 08:32 PM

Nice write, I enjoyed much. So beautiful and surrene, with such great images! But, I think the ending could use a little work... Overall, you've got yourself an emotional poem here.

-A

"Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
-Franklin P. Jones

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