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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2004-03-20 10:03 AM



Finally I realise
that you and I
have no future together...
Too long
I fought the idea
that it wasn’t
ment to be...
I always thought
love would win
at the end...
now I know
that sometimes
love is not
enough...


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-20 10:04 AM



Sometimes, it is...
and other times, we have
to travel our own roads.

It is good to see your poetry, Neeraja...
we have missed you!


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-03-20 10:08 AM


Neeraja
Love is but the mortar of the shrine. Well done

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-20 05:16 PM


I think anyone knows what is enough

For some a little is enough

For others it will never be enough

If it doesn't work, you make a decision and no-one else can make that decision

Good words in your poem

Dave

sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
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Oklahoma City, OK, USA
4 posted 2004-03-20 06:09 PM


Love is not always enough
Especially when it is from only one side...

Well expressed

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
5 posted 2004-03-20 08:11 PM



Like I said, I know this must be very hard on both of you. Beautiful, but sad words.

Hugs, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-03-21 04:44 PM


very true...I know that well
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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7 posted 2004-04-03 10:02 AM


Thanks for all the sweet comments, it means a lot to me!


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