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Open Poetry #31

Your Hurt in his Hands...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2004-03-20 07:52 AM

Listen to the silence
Hear it tread on steady waters
A tear is not heard until it screams
Laughter unnoticed, a smile forlorn
A stream of pain is held too long
The face of a woman deceives the day
The cry of a woman impermiates the night
Hanging hearts can bleed eternal
The hope it hides can die today
Embrace the truth
Prolong no anguish
Seek the faith of a coming day
Softly touch and gently speak
A kind word returns as rage
A tender kiss can be forgotten
Take hold the hand of diligence lost
Wipe away the glance of lonely dismay
Watch them fall
Feel them burn
See as he holds your hurt in his hand

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-20 10:56 AM

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-03-20 11:39 AM

beautiful thoughts, very peaceful write

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-20 05:23 PM

I found it interesting in that having read it from the top I lost the flow and actually read it from the bottom to the top and found the flow I had missed

Very interesting

dave

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