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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Seeking I seek the puree of create I’ve been told it’s never to late Open my mind blind by the old And see the spectrum of the bold Pathways of pleasure and treasure Spill beyond my conscious measure Far-flung worlds of image control Those of the goal of the soul Plunge me into the firmament Follow the flow of the sentiment Place my hand the rock of congeal Suffer the melting of appeal Within the night by seem of sight I see the North Star and its light. Race my ship o’er foam and crest To meet the challenge of the test It’s there I sail my ship of fate Into the word of my create |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
And there you have it...its never too late. Wonderful write, I really enjoyed this one. You write with such truth and passion. ^*Kimberley*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
inspirational as always, Sy  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fine writing as usual Seymour...ryme of great structure....very good images installed in the mind.. Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Sy..how I did enjoy this morning's write! ~Morning hugs, & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A most insightful look at your creative process, Sy. I marvel at your turn of phrases. Bravo!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem... I enjoyed it a lot! "It's there I sail my ship of faith into the word of my create" Just what I need! Thanks Seymour! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good one Sy We're all seeking that one way or another I'd say.....Very tastefully put my friend. Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Far-flung worlds of image control Those of the goal of the soul Plunge me into the firmament Follow the flow of the sentiment Dear Seymour, this is one totally after my heart ... Always we seek! Very very beautiful. Love and light. Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is like the wind, it continues to sail smoothly in the strongest winds. I so enjoy the rhyme in your wisdom, Sy~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
It’s there I sail my ship of fate Into the word of my create Yes, and you sail so gracefully over the sea and through unknown. As always, it is a thrill to read your poetic words and flowing musical rhythms. Sadie |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ahh beautiful writing sey ,to meet the test , yes ....... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you never fail to impress me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Make a left at the Milkyway ... I'm the third star on the right Come by and we will spend the day ... you can write rhymes by the moon's light. I heard a moth named a star after you ... youre so cool, what else could she do.  Plunge me into the firmament Follow the flow of the sentiment Place my hand the rock of congeal Suffer the melting of appeal See what I mean.... kewl kewl kewl  *ww*   |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It’s there I sail my ship of fate Into the word of my create" Well, I was considering moving to a cloud but a ship of your imagination's creation might be a better idea. Think I could book passage ONE WAY Sy??? |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Excellent poem Seymour. I especially like the close quote: But of course since it's kinda "sea" flavored |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey, I love the positive messages in your poem -- especially this one!  .......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful friends. Another day with not enough time in it. Thank you, thank you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi SY, what a delightful poem. The last 2 stanza's remind me of a childrens poem I have always loved. Wynken Blynken and Nod. You do this well. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Thank you dear, enjoyed your reply. |
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