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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2004-03-19 08:55 PM


Sitting on the ground floor
Of a poverty education
Street wise words
Scared abrasive contractions
Abstract layered isolation
Communicating strong foundations

Love does not carry an education
But love can heat up words
Intellectual building blocks
Educated prima donna’s
Stacked degree by degree
Educational self elevation

Stories of libraries
Each floor more educated
Hieroglyphic puzzling scientists
Nuclear fission exploring minds
Exploding writers contemplation’s
Towering transcendental manifestations

Philosophy of humanities reasoning
Reaching Towers of Babylon
Confusing language of mankind
Complexities of dictionaries
Astronomical analytical combinations
Found at ground level of total elation.

D.Lester Young 03/18/04




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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-03-20 10:04 AM


Powerful write and thought provoking ...
Truth is simple
and so is Love ... we complicate everything!

Love, Margherita

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-20 10:54 AM


Yes powerful, great imagery!
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-20 05:24 PM


Nice powerful flow

Dave

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