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vandana
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0 posted 2004-03-19 04:41 PM


Don't stop
From loving you
I love you
Don't look back
To the pieces of broken heart
You say every part of a heart
hurts
When somethings happens
Don't stop loving me
you touch me
I feel,
I have touched by an angel,
Don't stop loving me,
You brought love to me,
Don't and turn back to yesterday
This heart of mine,
Know how it feels?
When you are in love,
you go crazy,
You know,
I never been in love before
love stands on the doorstep
When you feel love is needed
Don't stop loving me

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-03-19 05:58 PM


Vandana...this is beautiful!
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

Margherita
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2 posted 2004-03-20 10:12 AM


Dear vandana, you give your poems a special rhythm, that makes me say YES!

A very gentle plea. Who could stop loving you?

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-03-20 05:00 PM


Heart may yet accomplish what words strived to achieve

Dave

Ericc
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4 posted 2004-03-21 02:43 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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5 posted 2004-04-07 11:32 PM


vandana,
   You write from your heart.  Enjoyed.

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6 posted 2004-04-08 12:02 PM


sucha sweet feeling of love flows through this....nicely penned

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

gemjop
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7 posted 2004-04-08 11:17 AM


We won't stop loving you V!

Love is madness isn't it!

hugs

Rosalind Palafox
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8 posted 2004-04-12 04:14 AM


With a heart like yours...who could ever stop loving you? very nicely said.  

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-04-12 09:21 AM


Don't look back
To the pieces of broken heart

~*~

No, no need to look back when the pain
of a broken heart somehow stays with you...

you can only look forward to a time
when the hurt recedes, and a new love
can fill in the cracks inbetween.

A lovely write, Vandana!

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