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" Slip-streamed"
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" Slip-streamed" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As drops condense to while away time fluidly dispersed of hours are random patterns thoughts display absorbed in glistening passing showers where trickling liquid images 'neath flowing surface glimmering mercuric shift into ones' sight reflect in pools soft shimmering the current slacks in deepened flows bright eddys in the streaming run spilled irridescent colors track quicksilver clouds cross mirrored sun as slide from shallows into depths cascading through this slip-stream, penned, were one to lose their way out here, as means to find it back again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc This is so beautiful in sound, image and form, very much enjoyed! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, Thanks. It would not be a stretch to say that you were an inspiration here, although, that inspiration may pale in comparison. Doc |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, What I actually meant to say, was that what was written would pale in comparison. Doc |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc You're sweet to say that...but just listen to this: "as slide from shallows into depths cascading through this slip-stream, penned, were one to lose their way out here, as means to find it back again." This inspires me....and I need it. Thank you and a hug! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very creative and passionate write |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Eloquent tribute to this website! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, Thanks again. Happy to offer a little something back. Doc passing shadows, Thanks as always. Doc iliana, Thanks, I'm gald you think so Doc |
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