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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-03-19 01:49 PM


Light electric you give me shivers
The light dancing on my arms

As you move towards me

The electric of your dress sparkles
The swirl of your breasts teases me

Our room is basic
And so are you
But the light in you
The love in you
Leaves me in heaven

Without movement you move the world
With eyes
The world is yours at a glance

You move your hips
And destroy my thoughts for fifteen years

You know you have me
And what’s more I know you do
You take my head and explode it
Until I know only you
Then you smile

If love is this
Then how can we keep the emotion
We burn as we touch
And in our lives exists one

And that one loves


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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
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1 posted 2004-03-19 01:52 PM


very beautiful, everyone should love like this, at least once.....sigh
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-19 02:00 PM


Wow!...yes...and may I ask for more please?
hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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3 posted 2004-03-19 02:17 PM


I'll have a look through the archives tomorrow

I still want to find the one of the woman who stopped a train by attracting the driver's attention

dave

Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-03-19 02:43 PM


I understand why they'd been requesting more!
Wow!
               Sadelite

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2004-03-20 05:28 PM


Simply electric
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