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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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13 Days I don't know what it is like to know my last breath could be the one I am taking. I don't know how anyone goes on with a pretense to the outside world that the pain is something they can cope with. All I know is that I must be having sympathy pains and someone has me gasping in order to give me a taste of what I know she is going through. But all it is doing is keeping us separated, when what I wish is to share her time. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Give her the light that is required, knowing there comes a time for peace. My prayers are with you, darling girl. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Pain is a personal thing As changes to the mind it can bring Suffering in silent agony Or tears and screaming endlessly A challenge there to face With submission or some grace. Gloom |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
--hugs-- |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I feel your poem. I wish you comfort. Sadie |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sad words Well written Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very sad story.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 peace to you |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad writin M...but you have writen it from your state as you are at the time...take heart that people at PIP DO care... Thank you..... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sending a hug hopefully big enough to bring you two back closer during this time... i really do feel for you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, everyone. I have been too sick for the last 2 weeks to spend anytime anywhere but in the home and in bed...what a waste of time...I am slowly starting to feel "normal" but still can't go anywhere near my sister in her condition, while I am in mine. Very frustrating for me. Hopefully by the end of the week I will be able to see her while she is well enough to enjoy company. Thanks again, M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Outstanding write my friend and I don't think there's any doubt about the empathy you have... jwesley |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M -- I know the feeling -- similiar things happen with me and my daughter. Be well, sweet one.  ........jo |
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