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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-03-19 07:16 AM


A Spirits Flight

Said with the dower of her power
And the odor of a flower
Hovering me with spirits play
Throughout the night and through the day

Winding breezes of trivial
Fairy teases set in pale
Posting phantoms of delight
Under moonbeams of the night

Chameleon to the sense of feel
Appealing to my appeal
Waking up my memory gland
Castles in a sea of sand

She stays within a rainbows road
Ghosting me the mother load
Breaking down the white of light
Into the colors of delight

And I am waltzing in a seem
With the music of a dream



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sea_of_okc
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1 posted 2004-03-19 07:35 AM


Definitely has a dreamy quality about it.
Nicely written, I enjoyed much

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-03-19 07:49 AM


Sometimes when I read your rhymes of way cool, certain lines just speak to me...stand out in your poetic prophecy...in your clever mastery of cool....

these lines today...make me moth giddy.  


Winding breezes of trivial


She stays within a rainbows road
Ghosting me the mother load
Breaking down the white of light
Into the colors of delight



if you get any cooler...youre gonna have frost bite on your toes.  

*ww*





Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-03-19 08:49 AM


"She stays within a rainbows road
Ghosting me the mother load
Breaking down the white of light
Into the colors of delight

And I am waltzing in a seem
With the music of a dream"

Beautiful beautiful dear Sy!!
What a wonderful read to start my day!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

scorpio
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4 posted 2004-03-19 08:52 AM


A very etheral blend of words and images...Much enjoyed Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-03-19 08:57 AM


She stays within a rainbows road
Ghosting me the mother load
Breaking down the white of light
Into the colors of delight

And I am waltzing in a seem
With the music of a dream

~*~

Sy, I'm sure, very sure, that you wrote
a poem with the word "waltz" in it before...
some years back.

Methinks it is ready for a dusting off,
and a repost...

Yes, I do.  

Good morning, Sy!

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-03-19 09:24 AM


there are very powerful and mysterious entities within the soul of love....incredible write, and sending a good morning right back atcha...

Thank you for writing and sharing.

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7 posted 2004-03-19 09:47 AM


Winding breezes of trivial
Fairy teases set in pale
Posting phantoms of delight
Under moonbeams of the night

I love this Seymour. Your poetry is always a true delight to read. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-03-19 11:20 AM


Good morning, Sir Knight. Your "castle in a sea of sand" has a magnificent rainbow arching high above it. You are bathed in glorious "colors of delight".

Your soothingly lovely sonnet makes my spirit soar within winding breezes ~ and trip the light fantastic. May I have the next dance?

~ and may you forever be protected by God's White Light

EA

Sadelite
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9 posted 2004-03-19 11:36 AM


She stays within a rainbows road
Ghosting me the mother load
Breaking down the white of light
Into the colors of delight


Neat description!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2004-03-19 01:34 PM


sea_of_okc
Thank you for the read and reply.

JM,
Glad you are getting more active. You are my Tikerbell.
WWRS

Nancy,
Thank you for the beautiful.

scorpio
Much enjoyed your comment.

Sunshine
You have a wonderful memory. Hugs

LeeJ
Thank you for sharing and replying. Hugs

Chris,
And you are a shear delight to me.

Earth Angel
You are the best Angel I ever had.

Sadelite,
Neat hugs.

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