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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2004-03-19 07:02 AM



Make love
with me
in the snow,

our spirits
submerged
in etheral light,

drink of the earth
gift of the heavens
our souls reunite,

let our skins
shed the plight,

from the world
of the physical,

that binds
in its might,

discard inhibitions
as we slip
through the night,

guided safely
to passage

as the stars reignite,

breathe deep
thru this journey,

the song of
each season

come celebrate life.


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-19-2004 10:29 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-19 07:07 AM


breathe deep
thru this journey,

of winter's dissolving,

now blessed by spring's longing,

come celebrate life.

~*~

May I join you?

bklynboy
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2 posted 2004-03-19 08:18 AM


Another winner.....good job my dear!
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-03-19 09:45 AM


discard inhibitions
as we slip
through the night,

guided safely
to passage
as the stars reignite,

Oooh, how lovely! hugs,Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-19 11:23 AM


I always thought that nature was at it all the time

Documentary next week I guess, after 9.00 pm of course

Beautiful words Ink

Dave

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-03-19 11:30 AM


Just great... very soothing poem. Enjoyed!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-03-19 11:49 AM


YES!! YES!! YES!!
Fantastic!!  Love this Michele.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2004-03-19 12:56 PM


well, in the snow, I don't know...

but the rest sounds great!  


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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8 posted 2004-03-19 03:28 PM


thanks for stopping in
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