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Dark Angel
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25 posted 03-20-2004 04:52 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is exceptional JM, I know I'm going to love your words before I read them.
And like Nan said.."these words havent failed you" I don't believe they ever have.

going into my library this is.



M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Janet Marie
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26 posted 03-22-2004 12:30 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Maree...thank you girlie for such a sweet and supportive reply...Im always happy to see your name.


thank you again to all who came by and shared some of you with me.

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.
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27 posted 03-22-2004 05:34 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Wow!  What a roller coaster ride that was and this....

If words but could, they would burn slow
down margins seasoned with your scent,
as I script your name in cursive filigree on
my skin, inhaling you before the ink dries.
My lips recite you, vocabulary exchanged
for body language in intimate explanation.

I had to get my fan out, hope you didn't burn your widdle wings writing those lines.  

I am late as usual these days, but I have to tell you that to finally make it here and find YOU here, twice is about as good as it is ever going to get.

Hope you are well m'friend, and thank you for your midnight flutter, this was metaphorically maticulous!  (Hmmm, and what else would it be?)

Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

Janet Marie
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28 posted 03-22-2004 09:35 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sharon.... well, you know Im smiling at your alliterate reply...lol....and sometimes we just must singe the wings....( a moths gotta do what a ....)  yaya
but I'm also learning when to say when... you know us moths...learn it all the hard way, heart on sleeve...but thats life. I'm always grateful for the inspiration...
Thank you for this delightful reply girlie.... youre not late...right on time.     

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

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29 posted 03-22-2004 10:49 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Your muse may take prolonged vacations of epic proportions... but oh, gal... does it ever guide your pen to glory when it visits you! *G*

Word did not fail you... they gifted us.
Janet Marie
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30 posted 03-22-2004 02:43 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Ruthie-girl... "Epic"...you aint neva lied... lol  
The funny thing is... I always feel inspired...but somewhere from the head and heart--to the pen...the words were getting lost in the translation... ME was getting in the way..lol
Thank you lady, for your kind words...hopefully mine will stick around for awhile...but if not...I'm ok with that too...Ive learned not everything needs to be turned into a moth confession.  

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

EagleOne
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31 posted 03-28-2004 05:28 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Your words have never failed to reach out Janet. Great to be able to read you again!
Janet Marie
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32 posted 03-29-2004 08:03 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Eddie...thank you muchly poet sir....so nice to see your name in the bluepages again.
thanks for coming by and the kind words groovy guy.  


Thanks again to all who replied....
these were some of the best responses I've had, I appreciate it muchly.
jm
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33 posted 03-31-2004 03:44 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

If words but could, they would burn slow
down margins seasoned with your scent,


Always giving me goosebumps! so good to read you again.
Janet Marie
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34 posted 03-31-2004 11:01 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

gemma girlie... thank you so much...that you took the time to seek out one of mine on your return means so much to me... truly.
thanks groovy gal...your classy presence has been missed round here.
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35 posted 04-01-2004 02:24 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

incredible writing! I'm in awe here
Greeneyes
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36 posted 04-04-2004 09:40 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

These words will fail me''


its not often that words fail me, however, at this time I am speechless and in such awe of you....but you know.... how I understand each ache of this and each splendor....

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

Elizabeth Santos
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37 posted 04-05-2004 03:34 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You need only your pen,
and the magic is there.
This is a rare gem of expression.
And I, too, have no words to tell
of my delight in reading this.
You are amazing
Liz
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38 posted 04-05-2004 08:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Dixie ... thank you so much for your gracious reply.  

Lauren ... yes...I know you know my girlie nothing like a poet to inspire another poet. *wink*  Thank you so much sweets.

Liz ... Hey there lovely lady   .... thank you so much ... its so great to see your name here, your presence and rhymes divine are missed. Hope all is well with you.


thanks to all for these wonderful replies.


Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.
TerryW
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39 posted 05-11-2004 06:07 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Dear friend,
     You know that I could not return without finding you, don't you?

"Seduction's spell in syllabic diction, if words
but could they would shed this shell of fiction."

Absolutely breathtaking.  I have missed you terribly!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Janet Marie
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40 posted 05-11-2004 09:18 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Terry...thanks so much. I truly appreciate that you took the time to come in and find a post of mine...
so great to have you back in the blue pages,
welcome home groovy guy.
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41 posted 03-25-2006 12:37 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

quote:
If words but could, they would burn slow
down margins seasoned with your scent,
as I script your name in cursive filigree on
my skin, inhaling you before the ink dries.
My lips recite you, vocabulary exchanged
for body language in intimate explanation.

Knowing I would be rhapsodized in your rhyme,
redefined in the heat of your articulate rhythms.
Breathless pronunciations decipher graffiti thrusts,
leaving indelible stains on manuscripts of lust.

If words but could, they would never be enough.

Words are unfortunately not enough for me either to comment on this one.  Would be wonderful to hear this one read, hint, hint!  
Mysteria
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42 posted 06-17-2006 03:39 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I hunted this down as I remembered something Karen had written in her comment...

M'lady Jan? The frustration, even through devotion, is all lit up plainly for us  in the italicized emphasis:

Seems the more things change Jan, the more they often stay the same.

You dear lady are absent but never forgotten!
 
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