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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-03-18 07:06 PM

Deliver them carefully

heads crowning
thru the brown veil of earth

there is no need for haste

breathe the light
as you bear down
on your own time

snow still sits on the branches
while you wait for clearance

the late march frost
melts into a tonic of hope
and a warning of premature birth

save a place for them

and bring them safely to the season
with the blessings
of those that paved the way for them

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-20-2004 08:08 AM).]

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-18 07:11 PM

You are blessed with a good writing ability. Enjoyed this one!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-03-18 07:28 PM

Amen. Poor little buds...peeking out and getting snow in their eyes. I pray too that they will be fine. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-18 07:40 PM

Deliver them carefully

to planets

heads crowning
thru the brown veil of earth

tendered with the neligence that allows growth

there is no need for haste

breathe the light
as you bear down
on your own time

rocking your beat
sweetest

snow still sits on the branches
while you wait for clearance

of runways

while

the late march frost
melts into a tonic of hope
and a warning of premature birth

from those happier summer moments

save a place for them

and bring them safely to the season
with the blessings
of those that paved the way for them

Love your word Ink - more than I probably should

Davey

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-18 10:01 PM

Beautiful Michele..as delicate as the tiny buds pushing forth.
Very much enjoyed this write.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-03-18 10:24 PM

thanks kids
thanks dave, glad to inspire

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

6 posted 2004-03-19 01:14 AM

A truly beautiful write...
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2004-03-19 01:29 AM

"save a place for them

and bring them safely to the season
with the blessings
of those that paved the way for them"

...just lovely... ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-03-19 03:12 AM

awesome!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2004-03-19 08:15 AM

Very nice Mish

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-03-19 10:52 AM

Amen

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