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Another from some dark old days
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Another from some dark old days |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It’s been a long night I’ve filled myself with wine With thoughts and dreams still unfulfilled I see a start of red Arising My life as I wish it to be Then it’s orb Kisses the world Blending it's warmth With my mind If only I could move there Then what of my dreams As I burn them in the light My day has dawned Tiredness calls me I have lived to see the day But yet failed to understand Life |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes you can't understand it, you just do it. I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this one, too... it feels very familiar. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I wrote IT on the 11th October 1998 and posted it on the Tag, Open Scroll. It provided the basis of watching the sun arise for a vision even know I can see; I lost a lot of poems because I felt they weren't good enough and destroyed them. If I do repeat a poem it will be because I feel a need either from me or to someone else Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate well to this...so well |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your search for meaning has taken you inside yourself....the answer sometimes comes from there...but often as not it is waiting in front of you...in plain sight...i sometimes do not see the glaringly obvious....because i am looking too deep...fine write of your inner thoughts though.. Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I have felt like this from time to time. "You sleep in the night yet the night and the silent water still so dark." |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
passing shadows No-one is an island as they say, we just get bit waterlogged now and again Goldenrose The eyes dont just want to focus at times and at other times pure arrogance prevents from seeing Opeth And you travel as a Viking on some ship at some moments when you leave reality and see the dark of the water and then some moon starts shining on it and screws the whole thing up Thanks to all of you for your comments dave |
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