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0 posted 2004-03-18 01:34 PM





Rap rappa rap rap!

Thonk thonk,
Thonk thonk!

Qwork qworka qwork qwork!

Caulk caulk,
Caulk caulk!

Kek kek kek kek kek.
Kek kek kek kek!

Thoinka thoinka.
Thoink thoink.
Pop pop pop rappa rap.

Qwork qwork qwork.
Thonk thonk!

Thoinka thoinka thoinka.
Caulk caulk.
Poppa rappa kek kek!

Qwork!



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1 posted 2004-03-18 01:41 PM


Death by Litterbation...  
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2 posted 2004-03-18 01:49 PM


ROTFLMAO!
Not to mention by flying litter!

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3 posted 2004-03-18 02:52 PM


Like in the old days of American Bandstand, I give it a 7, it has a beat you can dance to.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2004-03-18 03:12 PM


LOL, thanks Nan! that's about three more than the ravens gave it this morning

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5 posted 2004-03-18 05:44 PM


It must be the latitude, ya think?

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6 posted 2004-03-18 05:59 PM


Midnite

You sure you don't live under my morning window??     This was great!

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7 posted 2004-03-18 06:10 PM


Loved the title and the thoinka (at least I thinka it was a thoinka!)   I have appreciation of the detail of sound and thought given here.   I tried to depict the creeking, bumping sounds of my van going down our half mile gravel lane.   It was not easy!  Truthfully, I couldn't do it!  You did well with those ranting ravens!  I liked this creative write.  To the library for a time that I want to hear a playful sound...
                Sadie

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8 posted 2004-03-19 10:53 AM


ROFLMAO at Duncan....

Kacy...only you, m'dear...only you...

and...

yes, I'm still doing Windows...

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9 posted 2004-03-19 10:59 AM


LOL, hope everyone here gets a chance to know the group Corvus and their rap sheet.  (yep, a pun in here)
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10 posted 2004-03-19 11:11 AM


Original and rythmic!
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11 posted 2004-03-19 11:16 AM


Thanks, Grover! It was a fun write.
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