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center of the universe (a duet with Martie)
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center of the universe (a duet with Martie) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Here. I place a finger on the screen. Center of the universe. I'm melting crayons on cement to make sunrise from the night and turning day to dusk with just a finger on the light turn around the baby jingles keys and takes attention from just me to such simple da da da da her knees Darling dimpled chubbiness lace to grace a bell on a string kisses glory stickiness and her hair was gossamer floating dandelion breeze magic--pouting painful tooth bursting through a swollen gum one white mountain on the plain Here. A finger offered her... There. She grabbed it--trusting me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No one, but no one, is taking this out of my library. I'm even putting a new light in just to spotlight this bit of glory... Gads, you two duet more, ok? |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Nice job, Serenity Blaze and Martie! I loved the melting crayons on cement part and all of it! Perhaps you'll team up again? Sadie |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness. I'm with Karilea....into the library this jewel of a duet is going straight away! I felt this deep within my heart as I read it. Beautiful! hugs to you both, Chrislane  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, A delight to read. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Trust is so important! What a nice thought to hold onto. Kudos Ladies~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I deeply felt, and identified with, your powerful and emotionally-stirring, collaborative write! Love & Light, EA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Why am I not surprised???? Blend this then the kiss of sun the feel of rain as words fall on page in soft refrain mixed these days of passed remain gentle gentle till you stir the heart again... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!! This is SO beautiful! Popping it into my library... Wonderful ladies...please du-et again soon! ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"floating dandelion breeze magic--pouting painful tooth bursting through a swollen gum one white mountain on the plain Here. A finger offered her... There. She grabbed it--trusting me." pleasant images brought to mind... very nicely shared M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"floating dandelion breeze magic--pouting painful tooth bursting through a swollen gum one white mountain on the plain Here. A finger offered her... There. She grabbed it--trusting me." A year ago I would've read this quite differently than I do now. Brought a smile, enjoyed you two!!  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You guys are good together! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Awesome!! Simply awesome!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Here to thank you all and especially the marvelous Martie--shaking my head--she's such a lovely lady as you all probably realize, and she's very easy to talk to and write with, and yet? I just "spazz" out everytime I try. But she's gentle and patient and gifted and kind--so I thank you, Martie, for taking the time for me this week. Her talent more than makes up for my inadequacies. Yer a doll.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I can think of no two who could duet any better than you two - I stand in awe of such amazing and powerful talent - pardon me as I bow before this awesome duet...you two do it ...well hard to imagine better - Paul |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I place a finger on the screen. Center of the universe. thats cuz theres peeeeeeeepul in there.  ya know of course Im moth giddy... two of me fave girlies doing the two step..me thinks spring fever should bring duets to the blue pages.  Lovely ladies...lovely inspire. the imagery is perfect. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen...you make me blush...it is you that is so sweetly kind and patient and talented...and your words make me want to write with you again. Thank you for the honor. Thanks friends for your replies! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Mmm mmm, there is so much to like in this. You two write beautysmooth quietmatter |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
God this is just beautiful.. so precious. A most wonderful collaboration by two of my favourite poets. Thank you both I'm keeping it. M  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I remember those times. enjoyed! "You sleep in the night yet the night and the silent water still so dark." |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
im here smiling, lost in thoughtthank you |
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