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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-03-18 12:44 PM



A scribe notes a poetic advertisement
a tribe of the reader's enjoyment,
impart the sense of a word used by itself
an add on to another word off the shelf...

Part of a word denotes a famous Greek play
a newspaper ad directs readers to look away;
or part of a word reflects a taxonomic group
suffix of a word respects a mythological troupe...

So take out an ad with its multipurpose sense
advertise in a section for one sixpence
but remember the ladies of classical plays
the song of their ballad to draw you astray.

Reference to time after death arouses a shiver
or referral to a life before He was delivered
the tag imparts a word sense considered by itself
and a language is woven in literary stealth.





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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-03-18 01:45 AM



So take out an ad with its multipurpose sense
advertise in a section for one sixpence
but remember the ladies of classical plays
the song of their ballad to draw you astray.

After reading this a couple times,  I find myself bound by it's spell.

It is quite the ballad, poet Sir~

And I must confess,  I'm lovin' the tag! Heh!

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-18 01:01 PM


Interesting, original!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-03-18 01:59 PM



ad faveo




wordwizard
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4 posted 2004-03-18 09:24 PM


first stanza is revised with the insertion of a verb in the first line  and other adjustments...


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