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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-17 03:39 PM


As my future raps
To a song
Beating on the heats
heart stings
to the beat
as I dance

to a movement
that has no chance

that says no
treat me as human

treat me
so


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-03-17 05:48 PM


"Treat me as human" ... and I add
treat me with love

So ...
This is very good.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-17 07:43 PM


Margherita

If I answered that I would be in trouble.

Thanks

Dave

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