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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-17 03:39 PM


Why do I look at women and think sex
What I can't I see attraction not vexed
What can’t I understand the fairer sex
Why must my eyes be upward cast
Why must my coffee be a flask
What do I stammer when I ask

A girl’s short skirt sends me reeling
I sit on the floor   where's the feeling
Was someone knocking on the ceiling

I dont have the words for why
I look at the ceiling not the sky
And watch her go without a bye



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Mt Rowley
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since 2004-01-06
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1 posted 2004-03-17 05:44 PM


great message, some people just struggle internally for the guilt they feel for objectising women...

Im new to poetry if you liked it please tell me what you think of my other stuff

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-17 07:44 PM


And then we learn to love them as they are

Dave

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