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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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White faced black top the sky has its liquidation sale opening its garage dors it releases the surplus of winter snow fills the air soft as a wished upon dandelion expectations sink like bricks drown in puddles sparrows sip the aftermath dream of daffodils the disappointed goddess puts back her overcoat regardless of weather the equinox comes saturday undaunted by my my impatience or longing |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Holding the arms wide Image of useless objects Mystic on 2 wheels Balancing the spirit Of disappointing dreams that need Like your poem, got caught up on the Zen Sorry Ink Davey |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no need davey glad to inspire |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Philosophical anticipation ... Spring is impatient too to embrace you. Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
im looking forward to equinox as well, trade my hot weather for your rain! i enjoyed this |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle - now the snow is getting tiring, the weather is just to muching, don't let it snow no more... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ill try bill i will try thanks for reading everyone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning write! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Spring is here.....in florida.....patience my dear |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Well described - imagery! I enjoyed reading this... and here in Florida, the temperature will reach the 80s today. It is time for softball! "You sleep in the night yet the night and the silent water still so dark." |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Raindrops then snowflakes swirling in fierce north winds; Such confusion- under an uncertain sky, spring's first buds covered in white. [And so, he sits and waits, till she sheds her coat and dons that smile joining in embrace -two familiar strangers- as the sun reflects on bay waters, the gurgle of red-wine pouring, the sounds of gulls as they soar in the distance...]  ~P |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
God Michele...this is stunning! Very much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm sure the "Zen Master" will answer such a fine, poetically expressed desire! Happy Equinox!  Spring's a comin'! EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
into my library  zenfully beautiful, Mish wish I'd written this one |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and relating and choshi [And so, he sits and waits, till she sheds her coat and dons that smile joining in embrace -two familiar strangers- as the sun reflects on bay waters, the gurgle of red-wine pouring, the sounds of gulls as they soar in the distance...] ~P mangoes and merlot struedel and spinach pie manna from heaven in a sensearound of bay and the fumes off the Belt it all smelled like home |
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