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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-21 01:57 PM


I sit here feeling like God
And then he said
God I haven't sat down all day

Just nice to rest for a minute

You say God
Who is your God

Anyone who wants to take the weight for a moment

It's nice to have a break

But dont those who think they are God
Destroy and hurt

I'm a good excuse he said
I can't stop them all

I can try but just how much can you put into their minds
Doesn't it hurt you when this needless killing takes place
It hurts me all the time
But I can only reach so many minds at one time
No matter how much I want to

It sounds bad to say
But at times I look the other way

It seems to be a job that everyone wants
Until they learn the reality of being God

Nice to have taken a break
Thanks



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-21 02:00 PM


very cool write Dave...I like this one! I understand it and it seems fitting for the mood I'm in today.
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-21 02:04 PM


Thanks Shadows

Dave

Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-21 02:37 PM


Who'd want God's job? Very good write Dave!
DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-22 01:46 PM


Thanks Grover

Dave

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