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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-03-16 02:09 PM


Cold
  With flowing hair
  She said I'm here
  it's cold over there
  
  You're like a little furnace
  I'll just settle somewhere


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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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1 posted 2004-03-16 03:02 PM


Very good Dave.
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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2 posted 2004-03-16 03:10 PM


hmm warm and cuddly

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-03-16 08:22 PM


davie
u rock!!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-03-17 11:45 PM


Nice writing...James
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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5 posted 2004-03-18 10:34 AM


I just had to turn up the furnace cause it is cold over here.
Bon

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-03-18 11:17 AM


Grover

Many thanks

Dark Angel

Yes but I was a little furnace for a bit longer

ink

I'm not sure whether this was being a rock or rocking - thinking of yourself, I would say it was rocking


JamesMichael

Thanks James

Bonnie j

Are you sure the fire wasn't turning the heating down

Thanks all

Dave


passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-18 12:42 PM


I like this
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