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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-03-16 11:55 AM


Fish break surface...far out
Drawing your eyes beyond the upper truth
Everything was said and meant from streams to rivers
Rocks and shivers...paths conjoined and visions blue
And green the fringe of trees surrounding gold
Quaking Aspen glory...lost in thought
Jealous lovers in past illusions fraught
And left within your arms, the ball
The game and that certain silken jersey
That became a mummy bag upon the banks
Where morning is announced in Pileated views
A shamrock in the snow, beyond the icebergs glow
Pulling farther out the shore,
Waiting there in hope of more
And knowing all is well

Copyright Kkh 3/16/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-03-16 11:59 AM


truly awesome diamond , this sparkles with a pure light , its goin in my library right now     later fello poet and michyganda

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Margherita
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2 posted 2004-03-16 12:31 PM


All is well indeed .... your poem is quite a vision!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2004-03-16 12:42 PM


very peaceful, love the gentle rhyme within it and the visions described

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

PassionatelyRomantic
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4 posted 2004-03-16 02:08 PM


great job much enjoyed
Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-16 04:52 PM


A satisfying read... excellent work!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-03-16 05:06 PM


Exquisite Kathleen!
Very very much enjoyed the read this snowy afternoon.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-03-17 07:56 PM


It reminds me almost of a tribal rite, the tent away from everyone, flowers planted and a few other things

Dave

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