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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-03-15 10:50 PM



Blowing weeds
sealed to their fate
wed to their plight

extending fingertips
strumming the breeze
yearning for flight

language of silence
fingers draw signs
on the blackboard
of night

ascention of dreams
releasing of chains thru
the silvergull's flight

ringing of chimes
song of redemption
the bird gone
from sight

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-03-16 12:12 PM


This made me think of the seashore, when all the gulls are squabling...a spring afternoon...
Your opening verse was striking Michelle...
made me think about several points of view.
Well done.
TD

iliana
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2 posted 2004-03-16 12:28 PM


Inkedgoddess -- this was lovely imagery!
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3 posted 2004-03-16 01:08 AM


Beautiful imagery...made me think of twilight in the spring...sigh...thank you for the lovely thoughts.
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Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

WildPoet
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4 posted 2004-03-16 03:07 AM


Your poem carried me there!

WildPoet

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-03-16 06:08 AM


extending fingertips
strumming the breeze
yearning for flight


Beautiful images! I love your poetry very much.
Love and hugs. Margherita

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-03-16 06:49 AM


thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment
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7 posted 2004-03-16 02:03 PM


Like it Ink

Dave

bklynboy
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8 posted 2004-03-16 09:56 PM


This is an Okey Dokey!
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-03-17 03:18 AM


love the style

truly you

wonderful write...makes me wanna hit the beach!

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-03-17 06:33 AM


thanks all nice of you to stop in
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11 posted 2004-03-22 08:48 PM


extending fingertips
strumming the breeze


  sweetness

.......
JDW III

jwesley
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12 posted 2004-03-22 09:43 PM


Wow, my now favorite of yours...

jwesley

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