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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2004-03-15 07:20 PM






*
From where I stand
my gaze roams
over the past
and stretches
into the future.
As if viewing
a crystal,
I see the seeds
the blossoms
the fruits ….
Life!
And I contain it all!
Now.

All that is
flows and vibrates
in my essence,
making me a vessel
of everlasting
love and beauty…

From where I stand
I can see
your smile
dancing lovingly
through time.
It carries the sun
the moon, the stars
of all epochs
and leaves
the magical tracks
of infinity
on my soul.

From where I stand
I collect
all the fragments
of my journey.
Assembled, they form
a sparkling gem.
I reach out to
touch eternity
and find it
in your eyes.
There,
You wait for me
to embrace and taste
the Whole
of You.


*



© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-15 07:26 PM


A journey without moving... excellent!
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-03-15 07:47 PM


It carries the sun
the moon, the stars
of all epochs
and leaves
the magical tracks
of infinity
on my soul.

wonderful writing~

M

Suetang
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3 posted 2004-03-15 08:50 PM


Wow, Margherita!

The beauty in your heart shines through vividly throughout this lovely piece of writing.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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4 posted 2004-03-15 09:31 PM


a beautiful journey of the heart
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-03-15 09:36 PM


Delightful little shivers ran through my body as I read your exquisite piece of writing! You had to know I'd love this one, kindred spirit poetess!

And the crystal is so pleasing to the eye!

Love & crystal light,
Linda

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-03-15 10:34 PM


Margherita , this gave such a beautiful shining glow .... magical indeed

Hope

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-03-15 10:52 PM


the eyes of the prism viewed from within your lovely world, very nice
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-03-15 10:55 PM


"I can see
your smile
dancing lovingly
through time.
It carries the sun
the moon, the stars
of all epochs
and leaves
the magical tracks
of infinity
on my soul."

Exquisite...absolutely beautiful!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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9 posted 2004-03-15 11:20 PM


I love how you speak of love....it glows on you and very beautifully....

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-03-15 11:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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11 posted 2004-03-16 04:29 AM


Thank you all my dear poet friends for stopping by and commenting so lovingly.
Wishing you all a beautiful and creatively gratifying week!
Love and Joy. Margherita

Sunshine
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12 posted 2004-03-16 09:53 AM


From where I stand, I see a beautiful poem...thank you for sharing your gifts, Margherita...
NewEnglandlazurlu
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13 posted 2004-03-16 10:37 AM


I enjoyed this so much. Wonderful journey this morning.

Hugs, Marti

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14 posted 2004-03-16 12:04 PM


Yessss , many pats on the back for this write
very creative and brimming with emotions
i just woke up and i am happy now thanks

.......
JDW III

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15 posted 2004-03-16 01:58 PM


wonderful write!
Krishankins
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16 posted 2004-03-16 03:11 PM


This is VERY VIVID!! Life, love, feeling....it's all a gem!

Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!

DavePage
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17 posted 2004-03-16 04:46 PM


Had to read it three times

Seems almost out of balance and then an underlying image of a sum, a moon and meterorite hurtling in became the vision

Dave

Margherita
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Eternity
18 posted 2004-03-17 06:09 AM


Dear poet friends, thank you all from my heart for your loving comments.

Dave, you made me smile …. within every source of light I only see Love…... but it can come crashing down quite powerfully …....and shake me out of balance …....haha

Love to all. Margherita



Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
19 posted 2004-03-17 07:51 PM


Margherita - this is a gem, written by you...

BC

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20 posted 2004-03-18 05:59 PM


From where I stand
my gaze roams
over the past
and stretches
into the future.


WOW!  yOU  GOT ME FROM THE GET-GO!  I enjoyed your writing.  I so identify or have identified with what you say in your poetry.
                Sadie

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