»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #31
»
Thrill
| Open Poetry #31 |
|
Thrill |
|
|
Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thrill pursed lips tailgate redhead uptown downtown around town city spiked heels clickety-click sidecar slick biker chick clocks 120 mph plus minus celebrity status, zilched mushroom minuets ballroom shooting pool, playing poker- faced with sheer rejection loser winner takes less and less everyday taxed harlots and virgins olive oil gawking, walking, talking, stalking on the levelest of level sidewalks nylon stockings. ©2004 Grover Gall |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Grover, there is such a rhythm to your THRILL, that it thrills me ... Impressive. Love, Margherita  |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Grover This was a very intriguing write with some amazing images. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
||
|
dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
YES! Love those clickie-click high heels and stockings....and this poem! |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Grover! Great rhythm to this piece...enjoyed! Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover I'd like to say I understood this, but I would have to understand it first. It sounds like a new kind of rap, downtime, uptime, bangtown, shooting up, dressing down, making up, firing down, where's action cool cause I'm ice Like the flow. Dave |
||
Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done Grover! Much enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
||
|
muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i always say, i love "grit" and this thrill gave me that very much enjoyed this |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
