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jellybeans
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0 posted 2004-03-15 02:43 PM


after a great deal of erosion
and an ensuing earthquake
of massive proportion
our toes edge the overhang

separately situated, we witness
the remaining ground
steadily crumble out from
under, but the space between seems

unbreachable

looking down is to give in
and leap
so I must look up and trust
You Lord to be my next step, to be
the ground between

© Copyright 2004 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2004-03-15 03:18 PM


Well sweetie...after math I took algebra..it wasn't a pretty site either...then I wanted to intercourse, (or is that enter chorus?)....either way, I know I screwed up cause while I was singing Stout hearted men in chorus, my friends were all out getting laid and laughing at me?....I just can't win...yanno?...all kidding aside.,,Let's meet up this weekend ya wanna?..I'll "sing" for ya?...You're becoming a hell of a poet young lady......take care sweetie...you're much stronger than ya think..
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2 posted 2004-03-15 03:52 PM


when the ground shakes too hard, its comforting to find blue sky to hang onto

a good heart write, jellybeans

Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-15 04:07 PM


Very good write... put your trust in the Lord and He will direct your path. Well-written, enjoyed much!
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4 posted 2004-03-15 04:10 PM


Excellent write jellybeans.
You hang in there.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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5 posted 2004-03-17 03:28 AM


I wish I had your faith JB
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
6 posted 2004-03-17 03:38 AM



you amaze me with your courage and faith

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7 posted 2004-03-17 12:23 PM



"Remarkable" becomes you...
it is the strength that you have in an
unshakable faith
that is going to get you through...
everything.


jellybeans
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8 posted 2004-03-17 12:44 PM


thank you all so much, I guess I see my faith differently than you, when faith is all you have its not hard to hang on with all you got....*smile*
thank you again

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2004-03-17 07:14 PM


jellybeans - tommorrow will always bring a change for the better...

BC

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10 posted 2004-03-17 07:30 PM


Fly like a star wars destroyer
Tractor beam active

Jedi queued up

Very special words for something that has a yawning cavern

Dave

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11 posted 2004-03-22 09:59 AM


This additional pain happens all too often... the ones who should be hurting together instead start tearing apart...

Beautiful work, my friend... stay strong... and faith isn't all you have... you have me. *S*

jellybeans
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12 posted 2004-03-22 03:17 PM


thank you all, and lady, thank you for your love...don't think I would be here without it *smile*
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