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Dreams Murmur
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Dreams Murmur |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A precious sentimental cove Where complete awakens into silenced fathoms dove Shimmering in multiple sensations Flickering its recessed kisses on eternal complications Heart to heart clad only in the sheer of now Strapless smoothed in favors of the breezes bow Every move comes quietly accepted please Two spirits fused as dawn and dusk discuss their full degrees Writhing in the primal musk of pleasure Arched along one graceful fluid thought to measure Surged and lunged a moment’s thrust now caught Cool water cupped in hand to drizzle over thrills convergence wrought Encouraging the flourishing of blossoms begging bloom And after all, the curtain call will find as bare essentials loom Along the banks of spent potentials mystically entwined Upon the moss so soft in elevated breathing find That paradise alive and saved a peaceful state of mind Copyright Kkh 3/14/04 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice!  |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Very very nice.... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Pity I had a shower before I read this I need another one afterwards Explosive magma heating to desire And idea Of water Steamed By currents Hidden From Anyone Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so many images come to mind... nice ones  M |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i am totaly captivated , this makes me think of a sunny day on the beach with a love and the waters on the body ...the moss part was sweet , now i know your really from MI lol great write Diamonds ....... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sigh, you had me there, inside the feeling very nice |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Charlotte..how's the web? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - peace of the mind is surely paradise... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ The title whispered a beckon to enter ... and I found it just beautiful~ *sigh* ... soooooooo lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Strapless smoothed in favors of the breezes bow Every move comes quietly accepted please Oh me oh my, what a delightful read Kathleen! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Reading your work, can't get enough and not enough time at the moment. Wonderful.. SG |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love the meter of this dream song. |
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