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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-03-15 08:52 AM



Will There Be More Soon

It was not a long letter
Not even a quick note
It was just the one line
Much like reading a quote

I began to wonder why
Much too busy I guess
Seems he had no time
Or had nothing to express

Giving his whereabouts
Update with no content
Fingers typing one line
In the few moments spent

What do I read between
When I see just one line
Does this spell changes
Or is it an in-between time

Will there be more soon
I see words become few
Was it sent as a teaser
One line leaves me no clue

Hope©2004

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-03-15 12:37 PM


somehow this breaks my heart...please take care
HopeS
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2 posted 2004-03-15 12:45 PM


Thank you Dixie for your caring reply .... hey I promise I will be ok

Hope

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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3 posted 2004-03-15 02:02 PM


Knowing the man
You know more than us

My phone bills from Manila
cost
and I always swear
I will never ring home
Every night

Everyone is different
What you prized is golden
No one can make your choice

Someone said once
leave women alone

just get yourself an obsession
bikes, electronics, robots (no comment here), something you can enjoy (I will get pilliored for that one) but leave thw women alone, unless of course
you happen to love them

dave

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-03-15 08:21 PM


What do I read between
When I see just one line


I can understand that one...especially since I always read between the lines...
hugs
M  and that Dave sure can make me smile with his responses ~

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5 posted 2004-03-15 09:36 PM


ive been through this myself...and it hurts...
hoping the next letter you recieve is bursting full!  

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2004-03-16 04:56 AM


Dearest Hope, you have such a way to express profound melancholy that touches me always …. with time everything changes … it’s a matter of fact and it hurts, no doubt.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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