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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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night creeps within as the darkness, brings up the cold wind billows shadows flash against their faces with slow motion lip movements .. eyes moving, across his soul whispering with the dream , finding a cast of actors who lost their themes its in your hand , just read it again something will appear in the rain out of the skys free of rein ....... JDW III [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (03-15-2004 12:33 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting writing, seems almost metaphysical in nature. Words to ponder. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"with slow motion lip movements .. eyes moving, across his soul whispering with the dream , finding a cast of actors who lost there themes its in your hand , just read it again"  you know...just how good this is...  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i don't think i could say enough about this piece and manage to get across just how good i think it is... without rambling. snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...an awesome write, once again |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You captured a lot of image, emotion, ideas Yes a great write Dave |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wolf I know this place, it is far from anything made by humans, I go there to find answers..sometime succeding, sometimes not...it all depends how pure my spirit is when I enter.. enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
iliana... ...words to ponder ,oh how great thank you Muted ...i realy didnt think anyone would like this one lol ...i am so happy u like it ..hugs . i just layed down with my journal and one of my favorite pens ...and just went with how i felt at the time ... Snow... ....i couldn't possibly make you that speachless ...oh my my i better keep writing then lol thanks sweetyPassing ....always love your input thanks babeDave ... i am trying to use less words and more emotion , but its a hard thing to master ..thanks for the reply D Ice ... that sounds so cool , i know what you mean ...thanks for reading happy you all liked this one -Jwolfy |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good write! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks for reading grover ....... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmm...I love it when you call me babe  |
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