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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-14 04:26 PM



I sat in a darken room
You came to me on air
I loved you at first sight
But you're not for me or there

I looked into your eyes
I loved your very feel
I like the way your bottom wiggled
I wanted you for real

Two nights later you came to me
Sparkling as the stars
And then you served to me
Spinach, cheese and mars

We talked about the ballet
I drew your every breath

And then the curtain called

For one last quick

Riposte

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-14 07:51 PM


"And then the curtain called

For one last quick

Riposte"  Interesting ending.

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-15 05:43 AM


I stayed in a hotel in South Wales for about a year.

One of the ladies working for spare money in the restaurant had been a dancer until a fall.

We held a kind of banter when the owner wasn't around.

I suppose I dressed this up amongst our nonsence conversations.

Dave

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