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Springtime Grace (For Grover)
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Springtime Grace (For Grover) |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The thing about blossoms is their potential unfolding from some quiet place not entirely numb after all a struggle, yet gifting of grace Once the work starts there’s change in perspective it’s easy to lose sight of the vision but hope inspires the forward motion as destiny’s journey begins New pleasures slowly reveal themselves like springtime shedding blankets of snow the blossoms burst open like hearts receiving the love that will make them glow Love forms connections, firm roots to blossoms encouraging them as they grow sharing their knowledge holding them up, simply saying “Here’s what I know”. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a graceful unfolding, the thought and the poem |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the blossoms burst open like hearts receiving the love that will make them glow How beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how I love that last verse! sweet write |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love forms connections, firm roots to blossoms encouraging them as they grow sharing their knowledge holding them up, simply saying “Here’s what I know”. Wow! Wonderful. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks a million!!! Grover. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Grover, you're one in a million, so just keep on shinin'. ~K~ |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Great stuff. Kahlil. Here's my spring poem. Feeding on the burning ice Locked in frosts dying vise Winter drops its frozen tear To melt upon Springs blushing rear WildPoet  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
It's so YOU, WildPoet! hahaha! I LOVE it!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The thing about blossoms is their potential unfolding from some quiet place not entirely numb after all a struggle, yet gifting of grace ============================== what an outstanding opening verse... love the imagery and the intend of its personifi... very hopefilled write |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you so much JM, thank you everyone! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
*applause* What a fabulous inspiring write. You made my heart sing Kahlil~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks, Bluesy! We should sing in spring...glad I could help! ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed reading this, Kahlil! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you, iliana...you were moonlighting again... ~K~ |
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