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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-03-14 11:07 AM



Waves Span The Distance

In being there in thoughts
With each flow of the tide
On the same wavelength
Upon ocean far and wide

With soft soothing sounds
Heart motions in harmony
Waves span the distance
Upon moon tide rhapsody

Love lands shore to shore
Conveyed with assurence
Hearts aglow with reason
Upon waves of endurence

Along the crests of waves
Hearts whispering amore
Love notes are cherished
Upon heart's forevermore

HopeĀ©2004

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-03-14 12:06 PM


Dear Hope, this is very sweet and soothing, plus very beautifully written.
Love and hugs. Margherita

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-03-14 01:49 PM


ah yes...I think I will have to visit the beach tonight after work
HopeS
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3 posted 2004-03-14 01:56 PM


Thank you Margherita , living by the ocean ,I often feel soothed by the waves

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2004-03-14 01:58 PM


thanks Dixie , yes the ocean can often  inspire .... I was sat at the beach cafe today

Hope

Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-19 06:15 PM


Very nice, soft and soothing!
DavePage
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6 posted 2004-03-20 07:04 PM


You write so well it is unbelievable

dave

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