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aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2004-03-14 09:42 AM

A snow temple journey to the mountains top
lost in flight like another bird
my vision extends beyond my body
soul diver, the depth of the soul is
bottomless .........................
to frightend or fearless the light may
always be there for your guidence
somehow the smoke clears
all around the music fades,
to a beautiful silence..........
floating crystals of imagination
assembling for the stars above them
and the planets below us
melting cores....................
ice cold surface, ridge runners of the moon
a collection for special timers
missing the days when our smiles all,
seemed as one.................
letters of magic and words of mystery
hidden between the meadow,
lays the secret of all .

JDWIII

"It's great to be alive"
JDW I

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-14 09:46 AM

hidden between the meadow,
lays the secret of all .
Yes!

Very beautiful write. Yawning? No, you made me breathe!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-03-14 09:49 AM

aujussy wolf
Enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-14 02:26 PM

yes, it does

gawd, this is good!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-03-14 04:37 PM

Very interesting write. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-03-14 04:39 PM

somehow the smoke clears
all around the music fades,
to a beautiful silence..........

This was the point for me

Dave

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-03-14 06:48 PM

floating crystals of imagination

some lovely lines and I was drawn in by your title

*s
M

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-03-14 07:24 PM

the silence is very "pretty" sometimes

i dont know what secret lays in the meadows, but, im sure its worth the journey

this was a beautiful flight of imagination

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2004-03-14 08:34 PM

Marita ...
oh yawns are not that bad , breaths are much better though lol thanks again M

Sayber...
happy to give such a grand poet joy ..hoo ray ..hoo ray .. thanks tabin...: )

Passing shads ...
oh my ...was it that good !lol

i am blushing ...heheee

Nightshade ....
glad you liked it , and cool quote signature thing ..i agree : )

Dave ...
yeahhh thanks for the reply fellow writer : )

Nakd...
hahaa i knew it would draw in someone lol got ya babe ...thanks

and last but not least
Muted ...
lol whats in the meadow ? hmmmm whatever you can imagine

.......
JDW III

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2004-03-15 06:55 AM

Wolf
Sounds like a vision quest...
enjoyed
________ice
><>

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2016-02-14 02:49 PM

Thank you Ice! glad you gave it a read!

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

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