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Invisible Eyes of Yawning

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aujussy wolf
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A snow temple journey to the mountains top
lost in flight like another bird
my vision extends beyond my body
soul diver, the depth of the soul is
bottomless .........................
to frightend or fearless the light may
always be there for your guidence
somehow the smoke clears
all around the music fades,
to a beautiful silence..........
floating crystals of imagination
assembling for the stars above them
and the planets below us
melting cores....................
ice cold surface, ridge runners of the moon
a collection for special timers
missing the days when our smiles all,
seemed as one.................
letters of magic and words of mystery
hidden between the meadow,
lays the secret of all .

                                          
JDWIII


"It's great to be alive"
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1 posted 03-14-2004 09:46 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

hidden between the meadow,
lays the secret of all .
Yes!

Very beautiful write. Yawning? No, you made me breathe!
Love, Margherita
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aujussy wolf
Enjoyed the read.
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yes, it does

gawd, this is good!
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Very interesting write. Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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somehow the smoke clears
all around the music fades,
to a beautiful silence..........

This was the point for me

Dave
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floating crystals of imagination


some lovely lines  and I was drawn in by your title

*s
M
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the silence is very "pretty" sometimes
i dont know what secret lays in the meadows, but, im sure its worth the journey
this was a beautiful flight of imagination
aujussy wolf
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Marita ...
oh yawns are not that bad , breaths are much better though lol thanks again M

Sayber...
happy to give such a grand poet joy ..hoo ray ..hoo ray .. thanks tabin...: )

Passing shads ...
oh my ...was it that good !lol
i am blushing ...heheee

Nightshade ....
glad you liked it , and cool quote signature thing ..i agree : )

Dave ...
yeahhh thanks for the reply fellow writer : )

Nakd...
hahaa i knew it would draw in someone lol got ya babe ...thanks

and last but not least
Muted ...
lol whats in the meadow ? hmmmm whatever you can imagine

.......
JDW III

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Wolf
Sounds like a vision quest...
enjoyed
________ice
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10 posted 02-14-2016 02:49 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

Thank you Ice! glad you gave it a read!

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

 
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