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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2004-03-13 10:16 PM


STEP RIGHT UP, YOU MORTAL FOOLS!
TIME TO PLAY WITH OUR NEW TOOLS!
TIME TO LOSE OUR INNOCENCE.
Time to die without recompense.

IF EVERYONES FEELINGS COULD BE FELT,
ALL AT ONCE,
IT WOULD PROBABLY HURT
ALOT

SO GIVE GOD A LITTLE MORE RESPECT
He suffers.

FOR US

WHat ThE HeLl Is GoInG On?

Where has that stupid soul of mine run off to?

He's gone to carnival earth, my friend!
He'll meet you there when you meet your end!

I'm going insane

WAAAY TOO MANY DRUGS!!!

I thought i was in love..

but now im not so sure.

Yeah  i think i still am... somewhere in this putrid bag of scum that is me.

END MY LIFE SOON, LORD. YOU HAVE FORSAKEN ME

(and i miss you)

;-)

© Copyright 2004 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-03-13 11:14 PM


I found this to be powerful! Nice and good to see you...

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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2 posted 2004-03-14 12:07 PM


EagleScorpion -- Strong writing -- I liked the upper and lower case mix.  I think we all miss our Creator and that's why so many people feel unfulfilled -- if we are very still, sincere, and patient (and listen with our hearts) -- I believe we can connect).  Thanks for the write and hang in there.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-03-14 02:19 PM


I understand
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-03-14 06:49 PM


"(and i miss you)"

~ this line brought a tear to my eye and a lump to my throat...

Loving, healing hugs,
EA

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2004-03-14 08:42 PM


kind of harsh for here
but vividly done

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