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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-03-13 07:02 PM


Moonlight Scarf


We had our share of fun in the sun
on the warm shores of Waikiki.

And that evening we danced at the
Red Lion Club and I held you close to me...

You looked fantastic dressed in red,
You made the perfect partner for me.

Then...at midnight, you mysteriously disappeared,
leaving me in the moonlight holding your red scarf.

Perfect, to wipe away my tears.


JamesLee
March12
2004


© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-03-13 09:32 PM


a tale of passion for sure , just what i like to read on a night like tonight , another blizzard , snowed in again lol ...
cool writing


      
"sometimes all a rich man has is a dollar ,and all a poor man has is greed"

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-03-13 10:49 PM


Very sensitive write James. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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3 posted 2004-03-14 12:10 PM


Beautiful poem, James.  I liked the color.  
passing shadows
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Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-19 06:17 PM


Very nice!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-03-19 06:21 PM


Very very nice thoughts here James.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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7 posted 2004-03-19 07:28 PM


JamesMichael~
Dang ... this is wonderful !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-03-20 07:02 PM


Just find the head that matches the skarf

Nice one

Dave

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9 posted 2004-03-20 08:31 PM


cleaver
and sweet

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10 posted 2004-03-22 09:42 AM


A cinderella story...hope it ends happily ever after.
Sandra

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11 posted 2004-03-22 09:45 AM


sweet

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