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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Shadowland He calls to only me so quietly so soft come and I ache with aches indescribable, the pain so freshly wrought he cries out to me beseeching so quietly come to me in shadows he stands I reach and fail to reach and shed silent tears weeping only he hears come to me my love and would I do anything give anything lose everything to once again hie to him come to me Yes I would, I would sacrifice all to once again lay in his arms hear his heart beat touch warm skin come O my love… ~*~ Repost... ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 July 2000 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine An excellent and lovely write.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sunny lady... Thank you for reposting this keeper. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poem....Glad you reposted....I don't remember it from before......Ah, the heart never loses the connection....Such a wonderful but treacherous thing the heart......Well done ray of Sunshine! Eric |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sunshine..there is great love and deep passion in this poem...you have a haunting and evocotive style of writing love poetry.a yearning and an especialy beautiful way of expression... Thank you...i enjoyed... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Such a passionate write. I'm glad I was able to experience this poem, Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
in shadows he stands I reach and fail to reach and shed silent tears weeping only he hears'''' ~~ this is so very touching....  ~~**~~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
everything and more Karilea -- everything and more...time is an evil companion |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm so glad you reposted this beauty Karilea, I missed it the first time.  M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is such an ache in this beautiful write. I hope he hears! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine, I would like to echo Goldenrose's reply! You have been so blessed with talent!~ and to have known such a love...  Love & Sunlight, Linda |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Good morning Sunshine. It has been a while since I popped in to read you. Glad I did. I love this piece. It is hauntingly beautiful. Of course I knew I was in for a treat when I opened it...but WOW...what a treat it was. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I love this one!! Hugs for this Karilea. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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