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Love's Winter Heart.
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Love's Winter Heart. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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The soft sheen of nacreous light, of silvered settled snow. My heart beats with love, with passion, who will claim it? This i do not know. Cold steel grip of ice, ghostly grey frosty mornings. Louring skies, promising sleet and snow, marbled with pale azure blue. Inside me now at this moment in time, i am full. Passion, emotion and deep deep love, freely flow full through my veins, with thoughts of you. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (03-13-2004 04:58 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad write, sad feelings...but it's good to be alone sometimes, at least for awhile |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Inside me now at this moment in time, i am full. Perfect state of being ... so full of love. The winter scene is softly transforming ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Phil, You paint a heartfelt portrait in this write. Seasons do change...bringing us to such a deep appreciation for the differences and the samenesses. Nicely done. TD |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 its good that in times of "alone" we can fill ourselves with thoughts that will carry us through whatever comes to weather us  i enjoyed this |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Alone is good for self finding in all, but it still stinks. I feal for you man...... Juju |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly know how to tug at my harp strings... You write so descriptively and with so much emotion, I feel as though I am actually experiencing what you are experiencing. That is a mark of a good writer! May the sun melt the winter snows... Warm hugs, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your warmth shows through your words, Phil. Very nice *s M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Goldenrose -- a "golden" write, filled with love -- hope you find her; sounds like you're definitely ready! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Phil Once again your romantic heart shines brightly, delighting all of us. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a very good write, Sir. Thank you. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Cold steel grip of ice, ghostly grey frosty mornings." Sounds like this morning outside my house.. 8 inches of snow overnight....But the thoughts in the last lines are warm enough to melt all that... Excelent language use, enjoyed this poem,GR. _________ice ><> |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
this is was a deeply thoughtful piece.....and one i enjoyed starting the day with. snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldenrose - enjoyed the read... BC |
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