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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-13 04:11 AM


How sorry i am for the way we ended.
Not for the riches of this world would i do that again.

Your laugh i still hear ringing in my head, your kindness i will never forget.
My heart will always have a small degree of pain.

To change the way things worked out and also our complex lives, i would do in a heartbeat.

In another time and another place, things would be different.
Without you i will always walk down the lonliest street.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-13 05:15 AM


you never forget or get over true love
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2 posted 2004-03-13 08:07 PM


endings are hard to erase in ones mind
funny how the memories of "endings" never seem to "end"

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-03-13 08:35 PM


One may end the present, but it's a bit
harder to establish an end to memories...
or we would not have them.

All things must end at one time or another,
it is the memories that keep them alive.

GR...a challenge?  Write...of windmills.

WildPoet
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4 posted 2004-03-16 03:50 AM


Very good.

WildPoet

ethome
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5 posted 2004-03-16 03:55 AM


Nice presentation of the sadness that ensues
Good work!

Eric

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-03-16 05:16 AM


Sigh ... your sadness is felt.
The soul keeps track of all that was ...the beauty never fades in treasured memories.
Love, Margherita

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