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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-03-13 03:44 AM


guitar string mosaic

play me
  into an arch
while you strum
and slide each
chord into song
i am
the music you'll
never hear
the breath you'll
never taste
and the passion
you locked away
forgotten
  live again
touch a g a i n
believe that white hot
burns as long as
gold
and
  play me


©Snow'04


"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
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displaced
1 posted 2004-03-13 05:21 AM


what a beautiful piece of music that would be
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2 posted 2004-03-13 01:15 PM


live again
touch a g a i n
believe that white hot
burns as long as
gold
and
  play me

i will see what i can do with it on acoustic guitar ...let ya know later on ....
sharp poem snowy one



-Wolf

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3 posted 2004-03-13 01:52 PM


Wow

Now that's a song I could listen to again and again...

Vibrant

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4 posted 2004-03-13 04:47 PM


Earth immortal
Senses
Strummed
White hot vapour
In a caven

Foaming flowing beyond sight

Dave

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5 posted 2004-03-13 04:52 PM


ps... thank you so much for saying so.

wolf... would love to hear what you come up with. :-D

LR... *smiles* thank you so much!!

Dave...Wonderful!!! i love poetic replies.
thank you so much!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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6 posted 2004-03-14 10:38 AM


Hi Snow. Oh wow...this makes me actually want to pick up my guitar and blast away the clouds. I will have to go buy a new 1st string though. LOL! I love this. You have such a wonderful passionate way of describing things Snow. I am jealous! (Wink!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-03-14 02:16 PM


beautiful piece. enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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8 posted 2004-03-14 03:38 PM


Enjoyed the chords throughout this piece, Snow
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9 posted 2004-03-14 04:10 PM


LadySnow~
So much depth in this musical piece~
Lovely ... lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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10 posted 2004-03-14 06:51 PM


perfect~

*s
M

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11 posted 2004-03-14 06:58 PM



Music to my ears ~ and heart and soul! Lulabelle, my guitar, is calling me!

Warm hugs,
EA

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