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Open Poetry #31

Rain so Deep

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-03-12 01:42 PM

I wish
It would rain
so I could shelter you with my lips
one breath of air
as we dare to share lungs
exchanging fluids
engaged by our tongues
vacant by our eyes
filled with passion and promises of a chance at romance
where we will cause night to fall
asleep
and engage in the kiss
that melted the snow
and made forever so deep

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-12 01:43 PM

wow! whew!
I like it!
very sensual

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-12 01:56 PM

I cut the wrong words

June Jahfari (June@sunny.com) on Friday, June 26, 1998, 11:03:01.

wrote this

I meant to cut the words I wrote and cut the wrong ones.

I'm sorry about that.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-03-14 05:30 AM

now I'm confused

where are the right words?

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-14 04:08 PM

I was working though old stuff.

I often reply with words and I didn't have my glasses on.

I meant to cut the reply and edit it, instead I cut the original words I had replied to and then reliased pretty quickly afterwards as I always check what gets posted that I had posted the original words and not the reply I wrote.

I would not ever take the credit for words I didn't write and it mattered enough to me to immediately say I had and apologise.

I then failed to edit the words I had originally written and screwed up the title on that.

Dave

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