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lil' Angel
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0 posted 2004-03-11 10:53 PM


You have always been there for me
When I needed you
If I needed to talk, you were there
If I needed to get away, you were there
You were the one that was alwyas there for me
Then you met her and all has started to fade away
The friendship that we built
Is starting to fade away
You're always with her
You never have time to talk or call to say Hi
What is happening to our friendship that's fadins so fast?
Will you remember me?
I'll remember you?
I'll always miss you too.
I guess this is Goodbye

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-12 12:04 PM


I see where you're coming from but I think you need to dig a little deeper into your heart in order to express your feelings better. This is more like a conversation. LOL.
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2 posted 2004-03-12 12:43 PM


LiLAngel~
I think this is a wonderful expression of how you are feeling~
Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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DavePage
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3 posted 2004-03-12 02:54 PM


I think it is called love and most women in love that I have known immediately remove everyone else and then start with their own family first.

Yes I am cynical, but clearing out the stables seems to be a stock in trade of every new relationship

Maybe we call it intensity and just a hard nose approach to re-organising someone's life

dave

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