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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-03-11 07:59 AM


On the street,
Me in my black midst swirling white;
Off the bus,
You in greens and yellows smiling still.
The same smile
Worn a happy departing night,
The same eyes
There waiting for emotion to fill.

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-03-11 08:05 AM


"Me in my black midst swirling white;
Off the bus,
You in greens and yellows smiling still."

beautiful contrasts!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-03-11 08:51 AM


Hello, Professor! I enjoyed this vignette! I can see it ever so clearly in my mind's eye.

Love & Light,
EA

Krishankins
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3 posted 2004-03-11 11:34 AM


Very nicely done PG!!

If you're not yourself, then there is no you.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-03-11 11:44 AM


well done Proff.  smiles are good things.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-03-11 11:48 AM


Professor,
Enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-03-11 12:47 PM


kinda sad
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-03-12 10:48 PM



You boomeranged me to 1970...
where once...

Ah.  Very good, Professor.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
8 posted 2004-03-12 11:05 PM


hmm. the imagery

Juju

Opoetry4me
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9 posted 2004-03-12 11:29 PM


  Very nice.


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