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An Old Senryu-I've been feeling this way again
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An Old Senryu-I've been feeling this way again |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Empty can clatters, rolls across the empty street. Sometimes, I'm lonely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Nancy, I hope all is alright, dearest friend, I send angel hugs your way and know you are always special to us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I heard that! kickin cans gets old real soon |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel that way too sometimes, why dont all us "lonelies" get together and empty a few "cans" at the pub? |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
sometimes don't we all feel this way... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I"m there with you....so I guess we're lonely together |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Charisma |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Everybody feels this way sometimes...but i have love burning within me...and i refuse to let it get to me for long... Hope things look differnetly and your lonliness is short lived very soon... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From your loneliness has come a little gem of a senryu! I guess it's true what they say, "Every cloud has a silver lining". You created so much with so little! Excellent job! ~ Sending you love & friendship and please join me in a nice warm cup of tea and some chit chat!  Loving hugs, EA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
conveys that feeling well.. and as for the lonely. we do all expereince it at times, sometimes when we seem to have around us friends or family..and still we feel isolated and alone. got an extra can?  we'll just kick 'em till the dust covers our feet and legs, then go to the creek and wade in to wash off the dust, we ourselves created.. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
sometimes, i feel that way too. i love how you captured it! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Noah, I can always count on your kind response. Thank you. midnitesun, When you kick them by yourself it sure does.muted, I'm there girl. Any time. INclan, thanks-I hardly ever do, so I guess it hits me harder when I start feeling like this. It's nice to know I'm not alone in the feeling, though. shadows, 'lonely together' , at least it's better than lonely alone. Thank you Charisma, that's sweet. Goldenrose, I feel better already. The outpouring of love from pip is something one has to experience to believe. EA, thank you. I think it's one of my best poems, but I don't like feeling this way. Cpat Hair, you've made me smile. I'd love to go can-kicking and creek-washing with you. J. Samm, that's a real compliment. Thank you. To everyone: I've been feeling this way for the last few days, I don't know why, but when I got up this morning and read your responses I started to smile. I think things are better already. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You can't be lonely - WE won't let you! Hugs, Chris For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Brief but most descriptive. Well done Nan. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Chris- Yes, and I'm glad of it. Scorpio, thank you so much. Grover, thanks! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Perfectly rendered solitude. Yes it happens that me too I feel lonely even among people ... but thanks to God it passes always ... Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nan, this is written with perfection. The feeling comes through very clearly. Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Lonliness is no stranger here. I hope you have your days filled with the love of friends and family. Many hugs!!!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Margherita, thank you so much for replying. I don't usually feel this way for long-thank the Lord. Ethel-hug you right back, girl! Kris, I feel better just for hearing from everyone here at Pip! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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