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Have I Got News For You
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Have I Got News For You |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Have I Got News For You What were you hoping to find What reasons could there be In tugging heartstrings For the trust of my key Was that all part of your plan Was it your aim from the start To first target my mind Then capture my heart Why keep on stirring embers Why do you ignite the flames Whatever was the point If you play mind games Were temptations just a ploy Were you hoping I surrender Have I got news for you I can detect a pretender Hope©2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 YOU GO!I admire your strength here Hope...you sound like me  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
every once in a while you gotta say what you feel, this was great Hope, you go girl! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am sure you can detect a pretender! Very good write, dear Hope. I "hope" for once you are wrong to doubt maybe ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
bet that sent the pretender packing |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Good for you! That's a talent that's not very wide-spread. Nicely written, too, I like your structure. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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