Call it Memory Gain or Remiss in Forgetting

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2004-03-10 11:36 AM

Call it memory gain or remiss in forgetting
as Cerebrum grasps her colander handle,
straining saltwater from living noodle.
When liquid muck is drained
golden substance remains
to nourish cells again.

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (03-11-2004 08:50 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-10 12:18 PM

lol, how did you know I made spaghetti last night?

enjoyed this playful write, and?
loved that opening, wish I had thought of it, but my lazy brain was snoozing to the sounds of the wind in the trees!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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2 posted 2004-03-10 12:45 PM

great way to display the moods of the mind...it's always there...
outstanding write...smiles and hugs

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

3 posted 2004-03-10 02:03 PM

Very cute write!
Love and hugs. Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

4 posted 2004-03-10 02:19 PM

C., how very descript! Great write!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-10 03:00 PM

Interesting.

EternitysHorizon
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since 2002-05-03

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Twilight's Orchestra

6 posted 2004-03-10 04:15 PM

If I knew recall was like pasta
I'd have strained and drained
about a 100,000 times now
now that is what I call a tip worth remembering

Hey told you there was gold in them there words
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"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

muted

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since 2004-01-15

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-03-10 08:14 PM

oh my, i actually picture a brain in a colander!!
goodness, this IS cute (in a sticky yucky sorta way)

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2004-03-10 08:48 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this too got me at first then I thought of Noodles and Company, yay! (does happy fettucinni dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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9 posted 2004-03-10 11:17 PM

Midnitesun,

    Glad you liked it.  I thought I wrote it a little on the heavy side and was pleasantly surprised it came out playful.
Hm.   Spaghetti sounds pretty good about now...
                  Sadie

Lee,

    I have writer's block and am left thinking about my noodle!  I'm glad you enjoyed.

                 Sadie

Margherita,

    We do have cute little noodles  don't we?   I don't fully appreciate mine sometimes.  Until I wrote this poem about the brain and the noodle popped into my head, I had not pictured the brain as a "filtering" organ/muscle.  Now, I appreciate it a little more...  Thank you for your comment.

    Take care.  Smiles.
                       Sadie

iliana,

    Descript?   Perhaps I should write about "my little bean" next time!  Tee Hee.  I'm glad you liked this.  It was another exercise during writer's
block!  Thank you for you flattering comment.

                      Sadie

Sadelite
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10 posted 2004-03-10 11:44 PM

Grover,

    Glad it was of interest.  This certainly was not my favorite attempt at writing, just a forced one.  I think you picked that up well.  Thanks for reading. Have a good week.

                     Sadie

eh?

   I knew there had to be a shorter way to say Eternitys Horizon!  Is eh? ok, since you are one full of questions?   You are most flattering, but I don't particularly see the gold in them there words or in very few that I write.  It feels good to know someone sees the possibilities.   I appreciate your comments.  Take care.  Do I know you???

                  Sadie

muted,

   Now that you mention it, I'm beginning to picture it!   It is kind of yucky, but I wouldn't want to go without it just the same!  Thanks for your comment, "Cute in a yucky way!"  I couldn't agree more about the yucky!   Take care.  My thoughts are still with you.
                          Sadie

Noah,

    What is/are Noodles and Company?  I'm out of touch-what can I say?   Glad you stopped in again.
You words always provoke a question or thought.  Take care.  Thank you, again.

                        Sadie

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-03-11 03:55 AM

hehehe...this is great

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