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Innocent Dreams |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Phantom woman in the night, An apparition come to sight The bounty of your form's recalled (From still fresh dreams) * I wake, with a start, straight upright Her image, perfect, still revealed No fairer dancer ever danced, Across elysian fields.. * But laying near, is my flesh love, In firm existence, closely by I kiss her just below the ear, Because of pangs of guilt I feel. * A sigh emits on her soft breath, Her lips make smile, but still she sleeps Perhaps it is a sign that Paris, Takes my place by his conceit; Like Aphrodite did in dreams of mine? * end |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bravo, bravo -- good one! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Paris smiles...go ahead you may, too. It's ok. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ice A dream comes from a place you really can't control...and it caused you to gave your flesh and blood dream such a sweet kiss. I agree with Sunshine...smile! I enjoyed this poem..and can relate as I'm sure many can. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh yes, ive been there too.. and youve penned it so sweetly  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this IS very sweet. I get that middle-of-the-night feeling from it. ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
iliana Thank you, thank you...glad you liked it * Sunshine Thank you, I like smiling...even if it is a naughty grin... Paris slept with Helen but dreamed of Aphrodite.. * Martie I feel better now, both of you say I can smile so I guess it's ok....nice comment..... * muted Thank you..it seems a lot have had this experience, perhaps everyone? Only some will not admit it... * Kahlil Ya " this type thing usually happens in the "middle of the night" Thanks.... * Shadows One word replies are "sweet" as well...a beautiful word.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Ford, I understand these dreams all too well because I have them almost every night, dearest friend, they are so surreal and strange yet beautiful, sometimes ever too strong and passionate and they make me weak when I wake up in the morning! (sigh) So many of my poems are based on my dreams, as I believe dreams are one of the most precious gifts God grants us, and I share them in poetry in both the Open and Matre forums so others could relate to them and know they are not alone and they don't feel alone struggling with the mysteries and passions, or is it I just listen to too much Grateful Dead? LOL! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your dream words... *s M |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I Love It Ford. A beautiful sounding dream. :-) |
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