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So Many Stars |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ The sound of a piano playing from afar reminds me other days in another time sweeping across the keys with so few notes in contemplation a rendition of heart songs and set backs that fell short. What begins we only perceive as ours music like water will find a way in the end coursing through poetic streams and so many dreams. Inspired by the view of something more and sometimes less enables us to hold a moment still and relive the melody that opens a door to faraway places left behind. Cascading beneath a summer moon chained to memories that fill the emptiness passed over in the shadows changed in subtle ways accompanied by the darkness and so many stars. ~*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, yes, how real and true this is. Bluesy, this was really lovely! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How beautiful, Lori! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 lovely |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Inspired by the view of something more and sometimes less enables us to hold a moment still " That it may be experienced as if a lifetime... Excellent write here Bluesy and the inspire is almost dreamlike in it's softness.  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
What a beautiful piece. I started to pick out a favorite part, but I can't separate it, it all flows together. I can hear the music and feel those memories, emotions.... ~K~ (It's a keeper) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Lori how beautiful your words expressed , I am often there where memories fill the emptiness Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Cascading beneath a summer moon chained to memories that fill the emptiness passed over in the shadows..." you knew that would get me  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Lori, you certainly do have a way with words! Stellar! Love & Light, Linda |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Cascading beneath a summer moon chained to memories that fill the emptiness passed over in the shadows changed in subtle ways accompanied by the darkness and so many stars''' as of late I always look to the skies, for that one star to wish upon....this is lovley Lori....  ~~**~~ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh*...memories that paint peace and love as one gazes at the stars of the past...I love it... |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Wow! I can relate to this. I feel about music the same as these words. Well expressed and most enjoyable, indeed. Thanks for sharing! Opeth "If this grand panorama before me is what you call God...then God is not dead." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cascading beneath a summer moon chained to memories that fill the emptiness passed over in the shadows changed in subtle ways accompanied by the darkness and so many stars. ================================= Bluesy this is such a bittersweet beauty... a lovely mix of imagery and emotional reflection...love the above verse and the first one as well. Great writing groovy girl Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Breathtaking!!! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this Bluesy lady. hugs, Chris For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Lori I have been a daydreamer since I was a kid...these words describe a familiar feeling.. "Inspired by the view of something more and sometimes less enables us to hold a moment still and relive the melody that opens a door.." Nice work..enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this one, Bluesygal softly opening some musical memory doors |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're all so nice, I can't begin to tell you how grateful I am to be sharing the same page with you. Thank you sincerely~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
this is a strong reverberation Lori.. loved it |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Cascading beneath a summer moon chained to memories that fill the emptiness passed over in the shadows changed in subtle ways accompanied by the darkness and so many stars. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The quality of this is really breathtaking. Enjoyed much! Deb |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lori, this is a very inspiring write. So beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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