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Waning Conscience
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Waning Conscience |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Waning Conscience (A Triolet) From a waning conscience it may be, the flow of lines from poet's pen. Assuming the words are sold for free from a waning conscience it may be, how the truth reveals in small degree, the wrongs that live in hearts of men. From a waning conscience it may be the flow of lines from poets pen. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
is there a form you haven't mastered?  well done, my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned and much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have never tried this form, it suits you well Dawn~  ~~**~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I have wanted to try this format, but have just put it off...you did it so well...lovely form and content |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well done..very accomplished Dawn...thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed.  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, you did a great job with this form, and I like the message. ~K~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i forgot to thank you guys! i had fun with this....and im looking forward to trying another one! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
always learn something new from your sweet little poems , muted madam
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This form stresses the main thought and I love the result of your creativity. Love, Margherita |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Well written, constructed & rhymed... a delight to read! "You sleep in the night yet the night and the silent water still so dark." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! I admire your experiencing...I don't think I would have the patience for new forms |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there is much truth between the lines of a poet's pen...one only has to read there. hugs M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done, nicely presented! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well written - full of interesting thoughts and an interesting format - Paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea it rings works well |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted, profound philosopher that you truly are, your words here are so true, and as always, so very well composed!  ......jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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