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Open Poetry #31

Crying Soul

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2004-03-09 04:46 PM

Is there ever an end,
To such pain,
Try to make things right,
But things turn out wrong anyway.

Reaching out for a hand,
To help,
Times of need always arise,
Even as this soul cries.

Tears stream,
Then evades a scream,
Sadness lurks through the air,
Yet no one can see it,
Do they care.

Where to fit in,
In life,
Feel at peace,
Make everything bright.

Answer me,
Someone please,
The sun may never rise,
Even as this soul cries.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-09 04:50 PM

Very nice. "Answer me,
Someone please,
The sun may never rise,
Even as this soul cries.

Let your sun rise! Very good work here! Grover.

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

2 posted 2004-03-09 05:07 PM

Grover,

Thank you for stopping by.
I'm glad you liked it
and thanks for the encouragement.

~Kelly~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-03-09 06:02 PM

Sad, but powerfully written.

I hear your cry.
Sending love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-03-09 07:43 PM

Reach out for my hand and it will be there for you...

Warm, loving hugs,
EA

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-09 08:44 PM

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

6 posted 2004-03-09 09:50 PM

Margherita, EA, and Muted,

Thank you all for your support.

~Kelly~

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